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Sasha II: 1. Triple Stuffing "1... 2... 3!!!", yelled the giant mass of teenagers throwing up their graduation hats into the air. After a seemingly short school year, the senior class that Sasha and Alex were in finally graduated. It hadn't been that far since Sasha and Alex's confrontation that rainy afternoon, but they definitely did not mind due to school being out. This way they could finally get the pressure of school of their back for a little while before it was time for college. Also it allowed them to have fun over their summer, especially knowing that one "activity" that gave them both so much gratification.

"Alex we're finally done with high school! WHOOO!!
Sonadow: Forbidden Feelings 1
Sonadow: Forbidden Feelings 1

  Deep in the sea was a mysterious kingdoms separated from the human world, "The city of Atlantica" was ruled by King Jules the Merhog  and Queen Aleena the Merhog who had a son little Sonic the Merhog. Sonic was a energetic Merhog who loved to discover new things and learn about what he hardly knows.

  "Mommy, daddy look what I found" said the young prince as he wen't to his parents, "Yes Sonic" said Aleena as she hold her little prince, "Look isn't it pretty?" asked little Sonic. He showed Aleena a silver object that seemed to be a fork, "Sonic where did you get this?" asked Aleena, "I found it" said little S
The Voice 1
The Voice 1

   Many years ago in a place named Chu Nan were differents kind of musics. The people that had the talent to sing or play any instrument go to the kingdom to play for the king, the king always search for the most talented one. But one day the king was taking a walk when he heard the most beautiful voice that he ever heard, he saw a young blue hedgehog singing and playing a golden fluate. The king was amazed to see a unique hedgehog and heard his music, the king wanted that talent and he goes to talk to that hedgehog. The blue hedgehog didn't wanted to leave the forest, he just play music for the nature of the forest, that make t
Sonadow: Forbidden Feelings 2
Sonadow: Forbidden Feelings 2

 Deep in the mountains lived a Were clan, it's where all the Werehogs, Werebats, Werefox and other come to live, the had hot springs where they mostly wash them selves off, they were guide by the Werehog leader Shade, the uncle of Shadow the Werehog, who took his fathers place when he pass away. Shadow didn't mind not being the leader, he grew up to be a strong and talented hunter. One day Shadow wen't down the mountain to near by forest to take a walk, "Hey Shadow wait up" called out Mephiles as he wen't to the other Werehog, "Mephiles? What is it?" asked Shadow, "What can't keep you company?" asked Mephiles,
Kankri x reader part 1As you take your seat you start to look around the room. Some beakers over here some bunsen burners over there and sinks on the back wall. You now finally realize that this is a science class. I mean really how could not notice this sooner!? You sigh, taking out a note book, a pen, and a pencil. Your teacher introduces her self. Her name is Mrs. Lalonde. When you looked up at her, you saw that she had blond hair, was fairly skinny, and was wearing a lab coat that also looked like it could be a dress. As Mrs. Lalonde was going over the safety rules, you started to tune out and doodle in your note book with your pencil. You took another look at
Sonadow: Forbidden Feelings 3
Sonadow: Forbidden Feelings 3

Shadow was actually in the beach enjoying the night sky, he was holding  the scarf that Sonic gave him. Shadow closed his eyes and lifted his head to feel the breeze. Sonic on the other hand saw a shadow he knew it was Shadow, he pop head out of the water he saw Shadow with his eyes closed enjoying the breeze of the ocean he lied on a rock. Sonic giggled he climbed on the rock Shadow was resting on, Shadow started to feel drops falling on his face, "Is it raining?" he though, Shadow opened his eyes and looked up to see Sonic, "Hi" said Sonic, Shadow just gave Sonic a small smile. Shadow got up to face Sonic but
Sonadow: Forbidden Feelings 7
Sonadow: Forbidden Feelings 7

 Sonic was heading back to the castles but then he found himself with Marcy, "Hi Sonic" said Marcy, "Oh hi Marcy, I haven't seen you in a while" said Sonic, "Yeah well I have been busy and you?" asked Marcy. Sonic was a little nervous, "Oh nothing just at the castle and stuff" said Sonic, "Oh really cause yesterday you weren't around and also I saw something interesting" said Marcy, Sonic realized something and got a little suspicious, "Like what?" asked Sonic, "Well for some reason you were in the beach and a very hairy creature appeared" said Marcy, Sonic was now exposed Marcy already knew he's secret. Sonic
The Voice 2
The Voice 2

     Shadow was looking at the time, soon it will be dark, he was planning on going to see Sonic at night. Shade saw that Shadow was acting weird, "Shadow is everything alright?" asked Shade, "Yes, I'm going to the forest to play my guitar" said Shadow, "At night?" asked Shade, how Shadow would practice at nigth in a forest? "Yeah is more quiet" said Shadow."But what about the Voice and the dragon?" asked Shade, "Don't worry, I wont get in trouble and those are legends" said Shadow, Shade couldn't say no to Shadow, "Ok but don't be late" said Shade "Don't worry" said Shadow as he went to the forest.Shadow look at the sky it was
Sonadow: Forbidden Feelings 5
Sonadow: Forbidden Feelings 5

  Mephiles and Drake were talking about a plan to separate Sonic and Shadow, "So what should we do to separate the Merhog and the Werehog?" asked Drake, "Well it's obvious we have to keep a eye on them, and also watch there every move one kiss can ruin everything" said Mephiles, "How about sabotage?" asked Drake, "Sabotage?" asked Mephiles, "Yes it's a good idea we try to ruin Sonic and Shadow's little date" said Drake, Mephiles though it was a good idea and so he nod.

 "Sonic Don't let one little thing get between our friendship, please I....." Shadow didn't know if he should have finished that sentence the
Sonadow: Forbidden Feelings 4
Sonadow: Forbidden Feelings 4

 In the under water Kingdom, Jules was getting worried Sonic had left last night an didn't return, "Sir we have been searching and he is nowhere to be found" said his guard. Jules was extremely worried now, he then remember, "Bring me Tails the Merfox" command Jules, minuets pass and they brought Tails to the castle, "What's going on?" asked Tails, "Tails you are my sons friend, where is he?" asked Jules, "I don't know, I'm sorry sir, plus I haven't seen him in a while" said Tails. Jules was getting more worried now, his son vanish last night and now he is no where to be found, "Don't worry sir I'll search for
Sonadow: Forbidden Feelings 9
Sonadow: Forbidden Feelings 9

 Months had pass by, Jules become impatient because he's son wouldn't return Aleena tried her best to calm her king but it was no use, Shade explained the calm about Shadow and Sonic, and so they corroborated by helping protect Sonic, Marcy helped Sonic every mouth and became closer and closer than ever, Shadow learned how to be leader thanks to Shade and then that day came.

 Shadow was walking with Shade by the top of the mountain, Shadow looked down he could see the whole forest and beach from top, "Beautiful isn't it?" asked Shade, "It reminds me the first time I came with my dad" said Shadow, "I miss him
Sonadow: Forbidden Feelings 8
Sonadow: Forbidden Feelings 8

  Sonic was trying to wake Shadow up, "Shadow please wake up!" begged Sonic he quickly got out of Shadow's hands and put himself in a position that made him look like he was kneeling. Sonic was holding Shadow's head in he's chest witch also cover part of he's tummy, "Shadow please!" begged Sonic as he's tears slide down he's cheek. Scourge wen't to Sonic he was about to grab he's arm but Sonic, Sonic grab on to Shadow tight he didn't wanted to leave with them, "NO LEAVE ME ALONE I WANT TO BE WITH SHADOW" said Sonic, "Don't be a fool he's just taking a quick nap" said Scourge he grab Sonic, Sonic pushed him away
Sonadow: Forbidden Feelings 6
Sonadow: Forbidden Feelings 6

 Shadow didn't knew if he should tell Sonic or not, the fireflies were in front of Shadow's face, "What?" asked Shadow, the little fireflies landed on Shadow's hand that was near to Sonic's "You want me to grab he's hand?" asked Shadow, the fireflies made the words "Yes" Shadow didn't look at Sonic he was a little shy, he moved he's hand close and put it on top of Sonic's, Sonic felt something on he's hand he looked to see Shadow's hand was on top of his, Sonic didn't knew what to do now he was blushing a bright red and looked away as well, the fireflies each appear in Shadow and Sonic's face making the figure
The Voice 3
The Voice 3

   At night Shadow went to the lake to see Sonic, after Sonic play his flute he was playing with Shadow running around the lake, until Sonic got tired and lay down were there are flowers. Shadow walk to him, "You got tired already?" asked Shadow, "I have never run like this for so long. Is fun and tired" said Sonic smiling, Shadow smile too, Sonic sit and grab a blue flower and smell it, Shadow blush Sonic look so cute doing. Then Sonic pick some flowers of many colors and was making something, Shadow sat down next to him looking what Sonic was doing, "What are you doing?" asked Shadow curious, Sonic giggle, "You'll see" said So
Sonic Diaries 1Sonic Diaries 1

            A promise to forget

  In little neighbor hood not too far from the town, there was a house near by a school, we're two kids with the age of 16 were moving in that house, Sonic the hedgehog and Shadow the hedgehog. "Well that's the last of the boxes" said Shadow, "Finally, you know for a house this is pretty big" said Sonic as he sat down on one of the boxes, "Hey Shadow where should I put this?" asked a yellow hedgehog who came inside with 5 boxes with him, "Just put them around, "Hey this is a nice kitchen" everyone knew that voice, the tree entered the kitchen to find a green hedgehog with a black jacket and
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Name: Gabrial Wind
Name Meaning: Unknown
Nickname(s): kaze (wind), Able, and Grace
Meaning/Reason: Swift as the wind calm as the rain.
Ethnicity: White, Ittalian
Birthplace: Vennance, Italy
Places Lived: New york, Kyoto, tokyo, Romeand Italy
Current Residence: Enrollingfor the institute
Birthday: September 27, 1990
Age:21
Species: Shadowhunter, Neliphilim

Appearance
Hair: Silver,whitish-gold
Eyes: Light blue
Skin tone: Pale,a little tan
Height:7'2
Weight: 104lb.s
Build: Tight,lean, muscular
Clothing style: Graysilver v collar tux, white shirt, white featherd top hat
Accessories: 4 rings 3 right 1 left top hat
Other: Neckalace
Piercings/Tattoos(non-rune kind)/Scars: Kunai knife bead earrings, Clan symbol tatto on his heart. Sword-cross strikeing lightning.

Family/Relationships
Mother:Kaminari eilizabeth Arnold
Father: Leader Allan Wind
Sibling(s): Zen
Other Important Relatives: Leonith A. and Zenith A.
Familial Symbol: (ie. The torch for the Lightwoods, the stars for the Morgensterns) 4 Silver spirals going to the right
Closest Friends: none
Enemies: all who uppose him
Boyfriend/Girlfriend: none
Crush: Angel
Past Relationship(s): none


Personality
Positive Traits: Happy, calm, queit, carefree positive.
Flaws: break of insanity (He can get madder than a hatter!)
Good Habits: Reading, Wrting
Bad Habits:Creating tension and enimies
Likes: To be alone, peotry, his stele  
Dislikes: Zen, When nothing works and he has to fight demons with his bare hands, Being in a hospital.
Hobbies: Reads alot and writes poetry and stories. Likes fighting demons and praticeing with his Kantana.
Fear(s): Death and Crucifixtion

Favourites/Least Favourites
Food: Soup, permissions,any fruit or healthy food
Drink: Tea
Colour: Silver
Season: Fall
Scent: Roses, lotus,violets, lillies and marigolds.
Music: Classical, Rock...any except rap.
Time of day: Morning at sunrise
Movie: The Raven, and Harry Potter and the order of the Pheonix

Battle
Been training for: A war witch his brother wants to start.
Weapon: Serph blade, Holy water kantana
Style: Dragon martial arts, Swift flowing movements
Strengths: armor under his usual clothes, Muscle, and cham
Weaknesses: Short attention span. stroug willed and can be suicidle when loyal to the bushidou code
Favoured rune(s): Angelic and Stealth
Parabati(if any): ? whats a parabati?

Background (be descriptive) Kaze is a rouge shogan who is forced to be a samurai when he whats to be with angel and go to a school with her.
So then, they can pratice fighting demons and downworlders to be better shadowhunters.he has a long past a brutal homelife. Yet, is strong even
at the weakest of his times like at a funeral.
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Never trust a duck
Never poke a sleeping dragon in the eye
and never take kazes tea and drink it
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~DeeRezzed Apr 20, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Due* not dude, excuse my mistake
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~InarisMesanger01 Apr 21, 2012
Ok your excused!
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~DeeRezzed Apr 20, 2012  Student Digital Artist
The meaning of those names are well known
Rome is IN Italy
Height is unrealistic and he's severely underweight
Personality is virtually non existent and he's a Gary-Stu dude to his lack of flaws
Battle section is completely godmodded and rather Gary-Stu
Background is barely there.

All that just from skimming the profile. If you wanted to make a well developed, realistic character, you failed. If you were shooting for a godmodded Gary-Stu, then good job!

I suggest looking up some tutorials for developing characters, you could really use the help.
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~InarisMesanger01 Apr 21, 2012
Wha? Ok...sorry i forgot about italy and rome...I have no Idea as to what a godmodded Gary-Stu dude is...and Isn't it against the rules to create a godmodding Oc.? Can you help me then? There is a small reason for the under weight problem! Hea...I can't tell you! You'll have to wait till i publish his story! "The Lunar Children" to find out! (Funny ewil laugh!!) Smile! XD
I'm writing a story and may need some help...hea...sorry i'm kinda lost.? Hi! How are you doing?
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~DeeRezzed Apr 21, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Sorry, but your writing kind of sucks so I won't be reading your story. Nor does you character motivate me to want to read it.

A Mary Sue (sometimes just Sue), in literary criticism and particularly in fanfiction, is a fictional character with overly idealized and hackneyed mannerisms, lacking noteworthy flaws, and primarily functioning as a wish-fulfilment fantasy for the author or reader. It is generally accepted as a character whose positive aspects overwhelm their other traits until they become one-dimensional. While the label "Mary Sue" itself originates from a parody of this type of character, most characters labelled "Mary Sues" by readers are not intended by authors as such. Male Mary Sues are often dubbed "Gary Stu", "Larry Stu", "Marty Stu", or similar names.

Just add the godmodding to that and it means they're overpowered.
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Mood: Joy ~InarisMesanger01 Apr 22, 2012
its ok... i can see that and i should be sorry for not being able to write my imagination on papper...or make a good charather...i had n o motavation or support (Well barely from a few people...but..) Look at the other one..kaze or gabriel is a fiction version of my daily life and has a simmular personality to me...it means alot and he is me...even if i may be a girl i'm still stroung...You never need anything or anyone not even an intrest in stuff...just do it cause sometimes 100% always pays off later...so if you don't want to then don't but try... i have a few prodalodges on my other account and if you understand it then you'll know what i'm talking about...how it feels to be alone...shunnned and rejected your whole life...to find a friend who truly knows and loves you...for you.
"To move on first you need to forgive and forget. The timesw now, live in the present, now and hold up your sword intriumph as the light reins and fills your heart."
I'm an unpublished poet and writer...so some things just come to me...
and I underst
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~DeeRezzed Apr 22, 2012  Student Digital Artist
He's actually the same exact character and has no personality either. And as you actually aren't making any logical sense, I'm not going to respond to the rest.
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~InarisMesanger01 Apr 23, 2012
oh...ok...sorry thank you!
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